Subjecting Myself to Public Opinion (cringe)

 

Today's post at Public Query Slushpile is my query letter for my first novel Shadow Falls. I am feeling a little self-conscious about subjecting myself to public opinion, but I figure it can only help me improve.

Come over and give your opinion. I'd love your feedback (good, bad, or ugly).
Also, Blogger was having issues yesterday, so if you haven't voted in my poll from yesterday, please do. It's located in the right sidebar at the top ----->
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Thanks and have a great weekend!