Save the Pantser! A Solution for Pantsers with Plotter Envy

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Deep Characters for Plot-First Writers by Suzanne Johnson

Welcome to the first week of our new feature--genre columnist Monday! :) Today we have the lovely and talented Suzanne Johnson talking to us about developing characters when plot is what comes easiest to you.

Already, this makes me happy that I'm bringing in others to post here because this is a post I could never write. Characters are what come easy to me and plot is my challenge, so I'm the opposite of Suzanne. That's why this is going to be so helpful. Different perspectives open up a whole new slew of topics to cover. 

Also, you'll notice at the bottom of the post that each Monday columnist is going to give you their monthly suggestion of a great read in their particular genre. This recommendation may or may not be related to the post, but I hope it gives everyone some great new books to check out! :) So now, over to Suzanne...

 

Deep Characters for Plot-First Writers

Writing craft is a process—we’re all learning as we go if we want to take this business seriously. Or at least that’s what I tell myself when I’m trying to excuse my penchant for taking online writing workshops or buying yet another book on technique and craft.

My latest read, bought to help coalesce my thoughts as I developed my own online workshop on plotting, is Jeff Gerke’s

Plot versus Character: A Balanced Approach to Writing Great Fiction

. I haven’t gotten far enough along for it to impart some revolutionary new approach for me to try, but I was struck by something he hammers home early in the book, and which I believe to be true:

He writes: “I believe there are two types of novelists, i.e., two archetypes into which all fiction writers may be grouped. On the one hand you have those for whom plot ideas come naturally. On the other, you have those for whom characters arise wih ease. … Rarely do you see a novelist who is naturally good at both. I have never met one.”

Neither have I.

I’m a plot-first novelist. I come up with a big What-If idea, spin a story around it, and then go searching for characters to do my bidding. The result, as anyone who read a first draft of my first novel would agree, is a rambunctious story peopled by characters so cardboard they barely qualify as one-dimensional. Some books like this get published and widely read (clears throat and mumbles *da vinci code* mumbles), but not many, at least not outside the thriller genre.

One of the writers in my critique group is a character-first writer at the other extreme. His writing is lyrical and mouthwateringly rich. His characters are deep and I want to know them and learn more about them. But they don’t actually DO anything, and I worry that his book will never get written because he can’t wrap his head around the plot to sustain them for 300 pages or so.

The ideal, I think we’d all agree, is a book that combines the best of those two. It’s just that we have to work extra hard to make up the shortcomings on whichever side of the plot-first/character-first spectrum we fall on.

For my workshop “textbook,” I deconstructed the plot of J.R. Ward’s

Dark Lover, the first in her wildly successful paranormal romance series, the Black Dagger Brotherhood. I chose this not because it’s my favorite series (it is), and not because it’s the best book in that series (it isn’t, at least not to me), but because this book—this whole series—is such a perfect blend of plot and character.

In her Black Dagger Brotherhood Insider’s Guide, Ward talks about the series, and about her process. This whole empire, whose tenth book will be released next spring, came from a group of characters formed inside her head, who wanted out on paper. Wrath and his “brothers” came first, because Ward is a character-first novelist.

She’s also incredibly disciplined, and compensates for her character-first nature by serious plotting. Her “outline” for Dark Lover ran forty-four pages.

So, how do plot-first and character-first authors compensate for the part of their writing that don’t come easily to them?

As a plot-firster, here are some techniques I use to get to know my characters:

*The interview.

Ask them questions. Don’t filter their answers but type them out as they come into your head. It’s a great way to find a character’s voice. Don’t just ask deep, meaningful things like “What do you want most in life?” Ask them things like “What did you eat for breakfast this morning?” or “What kind of underwear are you wearing?”

*The character sheet

One of the best books I’ve found with character questionnaires is Noah Lukeman’s The Plot Thickens: 8 Ways to Bring Fiction to Life.

*Visual cues.

Look in magazines or online to find people who look like the people in your head. Having a strong visual reference as you write can help with better descriptions not only of appearance but actions.

*Narrative shifts.

If you’re writing in third-person POV, shift to first-person for a while (it’s easy to shift it back). If you’re writing in first-person, shift to third for a chapter or two. If you’re writing from the POV of one character, rewrite a scene from another character’s POV. The change of perspective seems to plug into different parts of the writing brain and help you figure out how your character would respond to plot points.

*Find your character’s type.

I discovered Enneagrams about a year ago and never looked back. This is a great tool for finding which archetype your characters fits into, and how he or she will respond to different scenarios based on type. You can find online info at http://www.enneagraminstitute.com/ but I ended up buying a copy of The Complete Idiot’s Guide to the Power of the Enneagram.

*Think like a Shrink.

In generic terms, this is just studying your character’s psychological makeup to look at past events that contribute to behavior. But there’s also a great book by this name by Dr. Harold Rosen.

Suzanne’s Recommended Read for August:

Dark Lover, first in the Black Dagger Brotherhood series, by J.R. Ward

In the shadows of the night in Caldwell, New York, there's a deadly turf war going on between vampires and their slayers. There exists a secret band of brothers like no other—six vampire warriors, defenders of their race. Yet none of them relishes killing more than Wrath, the leader of The Black Dagger Brotherhood. The only purebred vampire left on earth, Wrath has a score to settle with the slayers who murdered his parents centuries ago. But when one of his most trusted fighters is killed, leaving his half-breed daughter unaware of his existence or her fate, Wrath must usher her into the world of the undead-a world of sensuality beyond her wildest dreams.

Suzanne Johnson is an author of urban fantasy “with romantic elements.” Her first book, Royal Street, a magic-based fantasy set in New Orleans at the time of Hurricane Katrina, will be released by Tor Books on April 10, 2012. Two more in the series will be released in Fall 2012 and Spring 2013. Find Suzanne online at her Preternatura blog, or read about her books at her website.

*Look for more from Suzanne here every 3rd Monday of the month!

So, are you a plot-first or a character-first author? If you’re character-first are you a pantser (usually character-first writers will be)? Or do you, like J.R. Ward, compensate by rigorous outlining?

Four Levels of Plotter/Pantsers

 

 

On Wednesday we talked about if a plotter/pantser can change their stripes.  First, thanks for all the comments, it's given me a lot to think about. (Although some of you guys scared me with the I-tried-to-plot-and-it-killed-the-novel-for-good stories, lol.) I think what seems to be important is to figure out what your process is like and then use the methods that play to that.

 For instance, one of the things to consider is where does the novel-writing process start for you.  When you're working on a new idea--what comes to you first? What do you need to have sorted out in your brain before you start writing? I think the answers to those questions defines what type of pantser or plotter you are.
So here are some types I've come up with (feel free to add more in the comments!):
The "True" Pantsers--The Writing Equivalent to Sky-Diving
What they start with: Hardly anything. A first sentence. A hook. A setting.
What they do: Jump into the unknown enthusiastically for the thrill of discovery, hoping the parachute will engage when needed. 
Benefits: Tend to be the people that can bust out a draft at lightning speed. You get to write as soon as the inspiration strikes. Can jump around the story and just write scenes that inspire you at the moment.
Drawbacks: No pre-planning could mean plot holes. Writing and then realizing the story is inherently flawed. Losing inspiration. Having a pile of words that need MAJOR editing at the end of it.
The Clark Griswold Pantser (I talked about this here. This is what I am.)
What they start with: They have some kind of plan starting out (going to Wally World), though inevitably they go off course and end up enjoying the scenery better in the uncharted territory.
What they do: Have something in their back pocket before setting fingers to keys. For instance, for me, I start with characters because I'm a character-driven writer. So, I need to fully flesh out the characters backstories before getting started. I also like to have the inciting incident (or as I like to refer to it--the "oh sh*t" moment) and the major conflict figured out before I start writing. Then I fly into the mist.
Benefits: You feel somewhat prepared going in. You know enough about your characters that when you throw them into situations, you know how they should react. 
Drawbacks: You will inevitably hit blocks where you're not sure where to go next. This can lead to wandering, pointless scenes. This can also mean you go down the wrong path for a while and will have big cuts. 

The Combo Meal or Plotsers
What they start with: A skeleton of a plot and some knowledge of the characters.
What they do: These are people who probably work well with something like the 3-Act structure or the screenplay method. They know the hook, the conflict, the major turning points, the black moment, and where they want to end up. All the individual scenes are discovered as they write.
Benefits: You know where you're going, but still get the excitement of not knowing what's around every little corner.
Drawbacks: Even knowing this much could kill the creativity of a true pantser and not knowing enough could stress out the hard-core plotter. Also, sometimes the big points don't string together like you hoped and then you have to go back to the drawing board.

The Military Precision Plotter
What they start with: They KNOW what happens in the whole story. Every chapter has been outlined, characters have been interviewed, post-it notes have been aligned and color-coded. Scenes are numbered. Corkboards or Scrivener have been utilized.  (Oh, how I envy this type!)
What they do: They outline, plan, brainstorm problems before they even start the story.
Benefits: Less fear of the unknown. Fix problems before they pop up. You know where you're going and how you're going to get there.
Drawbacks: If this isn't your natural way, this can make the process feel clinical and dry and ruin the fun of writing. This takes time, so it may mean less edits on the back-end but you have to be patient on the front end. All the planning doesn't guarantee a great story--until you put words to page, you don't know if it's really going to sing.

So, I'm sure there are endless variations in between all those, but what I think  is important is to figure out where your writing thrives. And my guess is that if you want to be more one way or the other, you probably don't want to venture more than one level either way. For instance, a true plotter will probably never be able to become a true pantser (and vice versa.)  As much as I envy the plotter, I know my best shot is probably shooting for working within the screenplay structure. I'll never be a plot-every-scene-ahead-of-time person.

 

But I also think it's important to experiment with the different ways in the beginning because you may think you're one thing and are something completely different.

So where do you fall on the scale? Where do you want to be? What other levels/labels do you think would fit in here?


**Also, I'm guest blogging today at Heather Long's Daily Dose. My post is on Blondism: The Bias Against Blond Heroes in Romance.  Check it out here and leave some comment love (there are hot pictures of guys involved)!

 

**Today's Theme Song**
"Who Are You" - The Who
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Can a Plotter or Pantser Change Their Stripes?

 

I've mentioned before that I'm a pantser by nature and tend to stick to the flying-into-the-mist method. Discovering that was actually rather surprising based on the rest of my life. I tend to be a planner, love a routine, and organizing (though not cleaning) makes me very happy. And don't even get me started on office supplies. A trip to Staples is way too exciting for me.

 

I'm also a perfectionist. No fast-drafting and fix later for me. No I can't resist editing as a I go.

So it stands to reason that I should be a plotter, right?  Just think of all those colorful post-it notes and cork boards I could buy. But I've tried.  Tried to outline, to plot ahead. I WANT to plot ahead. Not knowing what's coming next is not exhilarating for me, it's stressful. The unknown makes me anxious. What if I can't come up with what comes next? What if none of it makes sense once it's strung together? What if I hit page 200 and realize this story doesn't work at all?

Luckily, so far, those fears have been unwarranted, but it doesn't mean they don't pop up the next time I'm brainstorming a new project (which I'm doing right now.)

I went to a workshop last year that talked about the brain patterns of plotters vs. pantsers, and research has shown that we are different. That plotting can kill a pantser's creativity and ruin their passion for the story. And in contrast, NOT having a plan can freeze up the creativity of a plotter.

I took comfort in that workshop, but now it's got me wondering if you're bound to your own style.  Does this mean I can't learn to be a plotter?  I mean, when I went to Michael Hauge's screenwriting workshop last year, I got all excited about the structure and thought--I want to plan my next story that way!  And then Tiffany Reisz (erotica author and agency sister) sent me links to the Alexandra Sokoloff's index card method, which looks really cool, too.

So, now I'm wondering if I should give it a shot with this next book. If I'm lucky enough to sell this current book (officially on submission with editors this week, btw!) and get published, then I'm going to have to learn how to sell books on proposal BEFORE they are written--which means I have to plot ahead at least somewhat.

So what do you think? Can a pantser/plotter change their stripes and do it the other way? Should they? And what camp do you fall in--do you think you could write with the opposite technique if needed?

**Today's Theme Song**
"Into the Mystic" - Van Morrison
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Pantsers Beware!

 

Misty Landscape
Photo by Denis Defreyne (click pic for link)

Hi, my name is Roni and I'm a pantser.  (This is where you guys say "Hi Roni" to make me feel okay about myself.)

 

Alright, over the past few weeks, I've attended two workshops for pantsers--one by author Sandy Blair and the other by author Kathleen Baldwin--and have learned a lot.

First, I've learned to accept that pantsing isn't an affliction, it's just another equally valid method at getting to the same goal.  But more importantly, I've learned that often, it is not really a choice.  Pantsers and Plotters brains work differently--not just with writing but in most aspects of our lives.

Pantsers like creating order out of chaos, but in order for us to do that--we need the chaos first.

An example:  I love to cook.  I'm good at it. But, I am by no means a neat or organized cook.  I cook like I'm on fire--pans banging, spice bottles littered everywhere, veggies being chopped at random moments, dishes piling up on every counter as I go.  However, once the meal is ready, I present this lovely, gourmet plate of food.

So, my husband (who would definitely be a plotter if he were a writer) watches me do this at night with knitted eyebrows.  "Honey, why don't you chop everything all at once?  Why don't you move the salt dish closer to the stove so you don't have to sprinkle to world with kosher salt on your way over to the pot?  Why don't you load the dishwasher as you go?"

To which I, of course, reply with a perplexed look, "Why would I do that?"

That would take all the heart and excitement out of the process for me.  I can clean the kitchen after the meal and bring it back to order, but doing that during the cooking would ruin the joy of creating for me.

Now for him (the plotter), he gets pleasure out of sitting down to a meal knowing everything is already done and organized for the night.  He will never "get" my viewpoint, just as I don't "get" his.  But both are perfectly okay.

But what does this mean for you if you're a pantser?  Well, what I took away from the workshop is that we have to go with what works for us and stop beating ourselves up.  Otherwise, we are going to screw with our creativity. Here's the warning:

If you are a true pantser and force yourself to intricately plot out the whole book--it could kill your creativity and you may no longer be able to write the book!

Did you hear that?

 

The passion and excitement for a pantser is in experiencing the story as your write.  If you write it all out in outline form first, you've already gone on the journey and you may lose interest in going on the same journey again.

Now, if you're a plotter, this is not the case.  Plotters take comfort in having that outline and thrive with that order already in place.  So if a plotter tries to pants, their stress over the unknown may choke their creativity.  So the key is to know what works for you and to stop forcing yourself into a round hole if you are a square peg.

Of course, that's not to say that pantsers don't have to plot.  Every story needs plot, obviously.  But it's just a matter of WHEN we plot--before the writing (plotters) or during the writing (pantsers).

And it's important to figure out which way works best for you.  If you're not sure which camp you fall into, try a few methods out and see what feeds your muse the best.

I've discovered that I'm a pantser, but like to have my characters backgrounds fleshed out before I start writing.  I don't necessarily need to know what is going to happen to them, but I need to know their history and wounds.  I think this need to know their past comes from my therapy background.  Plus, I'm a character-driven writer, so I tend to show up with characters and a vague idea of the hook, then decide, okay now what journey are these people going to go on.

The downside of this is that I often end up with a lot of words I can't use as I write my way into the story (I have 10k in my cut file so far on my new WIP), but I enjoy the journey of discovery.  If you are a member of RWA and get the Romance Writers Report, there was a great article called "Once More Into the Mist" this month on this very thing.  Author Jo Beverley said she often writes 200-300k words for every 100k book she publishes.  The thought is daunting, but that's what works for her.

So, moral of all of this: accept what kind of writer you are and stop trying to be something else because you may murder that fickle muse otherwise.

Alright, so I'm curious as to your thoughts on this.  What's your process?  Do you fly into the mist or have a GPS?  Do you find yourself forcing methods that seem great but that just don't fit you?  Did you try out various ways and see what works best?  Have you ever done something that completely beat down your muse?

 

**Today's Theme Song**
"Welcome to the Jungle" - Guns 'N Roses
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Freewheeler or Rewinder? Editing while Drafting

 


I know there is the age old debate of plotting vs. pantsing, but I think there is another issue that goes hand in hand with that one.  Most of the advice you hear about that first draft is to just write and stuff a sock in the mouth of that internal editor so the creative muse can sing.  This method can work for plotters and pantsers alike.  Get the words on the page and worry about them later, right?  Hell, otherwise NaNo would be a true impossibility.

 

However, as I write my first draft of this new novel, I'm starting to realize that I'm not so good at full out freewheeling like I was in my first two novels.  I can freely write whatever scene I'm working on that day without worrying about every little thing.  But, I have a hard time the next day not going back over what I wrote the previous day and doing some tweaking and editing or all out cutting.  I also need time after I finish writing a scene to think through what I wrote and how I want to proceed in the next scene.  Because although I do some rough outlining before starting, I only know the major strokes of the story, so I'm not always sure what I want to happen next.

Therefore, it seems that with this book thus far I'm more of a rewinder than a freewheeler.  I'm not sure what the cause of this is.  Am I not as confident in my story?  Have I been studying craft so much that I'm second guessing myself?  Or is just that each book has it's own personality and the its own way of wanting to be written?  I honestly don't know.

What do you think?  Has this ever happened to you?  Are you able to freewheel or are you more of a rewinder?


 
 

**Today's Theme Song**
"Backslider" - The Toadies
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Face Off Friday: Plotter vs. Pantser

 

Plotting and pantsing--two words passed around writer's circles constantly. People who are one or the other often wear their label with pride, thinking that their way is inherently better than the other way. For those of you who aren't familiar with these terms, here are some definitions:
 
Plotter: One who organizes, plans, plots, outlines, synopsizes, characterizes, takes copious notes, makes a storyboard, researches, figures out scene and sequel before putting pen to paper. Before they sit down at the computer, they know exactly what's going to happen in their story and feel confident that every scene flows into the next and all loose ends are neatly tied up. --source
Pantser: One who writes by "the seat of her pants". A writer who gets an idea for a story and/or characters and who might do some early thinking about basic story plots or characterization, but who for the most part, works off the "leap of faith" principle: "the characters will take me where they want me to go and everything will work out in the end." --source
Plotting vs. Pantsing

In defense of a plan:
  • Without good planning, your story will end up messy and filled with holes
  • If you don't work out your characterizations beforehand, you will write flat characters because you don't know their history
  • Plotting helps avoid writer's block because you know what you have to write about next
  • This makes it easier to plant early hints, red herrings, foreshadowing, etc.
  • Knowing the big picture ahead of time helps you solidify things like theme, pacing, and story arcs.
For love of the spontaneous:
  • Plotting smothers creativity
  • You should let your characters lead you
  • If you end up with a mess at the end, you can always revise it
  • Not knowing what's coming makes it more exciting to write
  • Beautiful surprises can happen while you're writing this way
  • Outlining and writing down each detail is boring
A lot of the decision to go one way or the other may have to do with your own personality. Are you a checklist, organized kind of person or a go with the flow person?
I have a hard time deciding on which side I fall. I think I'm a bit of a combination. In life, I'm more a planner. Every weekend, I go through recipes and plan out the meals for the week, then make my grocery list--separated into sections that correspond with the aisles of the grocery store. I stick to a routine daily and rarely deviate from it.
However, in other ways, I'm a complete pantser. This blog, for instance, is never planned. Beyond knowing that I'm going to do WIP on Wednesday and this theme on Friday, I don't have an idea of what I'm going to write about until I wake up. This is why most of the time my post don't get up here until lunchtime.
So I've decided on a new category to apply to myself. I'm going to call it the Clark Griswold (from National Lampoon's Vacation).
Clark has good intentions. He has a rough plan of what's going to happen on his family's trip. They are headed to Wally World--he knows his ending. Along the way, he plans a few more stops. Largest ball of twine anyone? How about the Grand Canyon?
However, during his journey, he stumbles upon things that are way more interesting than what he thought. There's conflict. Blown up cars. Dead aunts. Murdered dogs. (Okay, it really is a funny movie if you haven't seen it, although my description is making it sound morbid).
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Along with the conflict, new characters pop up out of the blue. Including ones that completely distract him from his journey. Like Christie Brinkley in the red convertible.
Although I hope my distraction would look more like Alexander Skarsgard from True Blood. Can't you just picture him in a red convertible, blond hair whipping in the wind. Okay, I digress.
So, although Clark has a general plan, he ends up experiencing a very different trip than he expected. He lets himself be led by the things and people around him. Then when he reaches the end he thought he wanted, he gets something very different, but much more fun. He literally punches his original plan in the face.
So I think that's what I am--a clark. I start out with a plan. My outline usually consists of a page of scribbles (including a beginning, an end, and a few points of conflict) and a couple of rough notes about my main characters. Then I just start writing and let the characters and story lead me. And most often, the story (including the end) that I originally planned look nothing like my original idea, but I like it better.
So how about you? Where do you fall on the Plotter/Pantser scale? What benefits do you find from your style? Are there any other clarks out there?
**Today's Theme Song**
"Holiday Road"--National Lampoon's Soundtrack
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